Well you didn’t think we’d just leave things like that, did you? Part 2, which concludes Holly’s story, is full of surprises and secret encounters that get pretty filthy. I had a lot of fun getting Holly and Julian all the way to the end of the line, and I think you’re going to enjoy finding out exactly where that takes them. Oh, but it’s not just the destination—Getting there is probably more than half the fun.
Loved the entire story. Very well developed characters, Robyn, Julian, especially Holly. We get to see her change, the “what”, “why” of change. We get to understand Holly’s motivations, then see the real Holly. I’d actually would have liked a different ending. Not a Happily Ever After. One where Julian tells Robyn as he steps outside from the orgy to take Holly so deep into the darkness of Holly’s needs, Holly cant come back. Holly’s addicted like a drug addict to sex. Tells Robyn to keep the slut. he then buys a mototcycle, rides off. Holly, at home finds an empty house. But that darkness as she calls her desire and lust for sex , any sex, with a man, a woman, even an orgy, her addiction , makes her realize, shes now free to be who she is. Do it for herself, rather “always doing the right thing”. Her marriage is over, but its freeing her .
I’m so happy you liked it! I have many more similar ideas. Like you, I prefer a dark, or at least ambiguous, ending. And I used to write those, but I’m afraid you and I are in the minority there. Thanks for reading!
lol yeah, thIs is true. everyone wants the HEA, where the couple stays together. Even in Hotwife stories. I like the “dark endings” because its what the characters really wanted like Holly. She doesnt want to do the right thing, did that for 20 years. she wants her thing. lust, desire, sex & the pleasures that comes from it. from men, women, & multiples of them. So the marriage ends, in reality, both get what they really wanted. What they hid even from themselves. Ive read some of your other stories. Holly Hold on Tight 1 & 2 is by far , my favorite. its complex, deep, each is a long read for depth of story & characters. where most authors write what i consider short stories. ( less than 200 pages). side note: fyi. Women read Hotwife stories to. I’m one of them.
I’m glad you volunteered your gender. I was about convinced that only men read these stories. It’s great to know there are some women out there. I wish there were more. The common wisdom is that women are by far the largest portion of the reader pool across all genres, so writing hotwife is limiting your audience. One of the things that excited me about writing these stories was my belief that women enjoyed them. I’ve since been educated, sadly, that that is largely untrue. Glad to know there are exceptions!
Whos saying we dont enjoy them 🙂 ?? Granted, the stories are written , arguably ,for men as erotica, Something to fuel fantasies to get off on. but these , at least the longer well written, thought out stories and are cool to read. But! they do tend to make us look “like sluts”??? lol also , not really written with our perspective in mind. ( Although Holly is close which is why I love it). their written from the male POV. ( btw, did you know women make up the bulk of M/M readers and authors???). we are lol. go figure. Anyways loved Holly Hold on Tight 1&2. please write more like it!! ?? if not dark ending but HEA, then ill have to make up my own :). lol.
btw, if you try to write something from a womans POV, ( Holly is close). we are all about feelings, love & relationships. While we do have fantasies of desire, sex, lust, we want love & we give sex to get it. . if you went the polyamory hotwife route thats closer to what we women are. we express our feelings for someone thru sex. David Stone’s The Vacation Wife is really close. just a FYI :).
Hmm, I’ve been curious about those David Stone books. Tried reading one (not tVW) some time ago but it didn’t grab me. Might give that one a go.
Of all of his, TVW is the best one of them imo. . Holly Hold on Tight reminded me of The Vacation Wife. Complex storyline & plot. well developed characters. TVW is a long story ( 329 pages) which allows the complexity, plot, & developed characters, plus that woman valued HEA. ( HHOT is the best of all of yours, imo)
I posted a review on HHOT ( wink) 5 Stars Titled: A Hot Wife Story Women can relate to. ( yep, thats my pic in the review) if you write more like HHOT , Im buying them. !!!